UNIT 8 : UNITY & COHERENCE

1.(9) Miyoko’s first stopon her flight on Tokyo to the United States was San Fransisco.
2.(7) She expected to find the tall skyscapers she had seen on postcard on New York.
3.(3) But San Fransisco did not look anything like New York.
4.(14) For one thing, it is all buit on hills.
5.(5) Many homes have views of the bay and ocean.
6.(10) Miyoko especially like two the bridges that cross San Fransisco Bay.
7.(8) The bay Bridges is majestic.
8.(13) Even more beautiful is the Garden Gate Bridge, stretching from San Fransisco to Marin Country.
9.(1) The Garden Gate Bridge separates San Fransisco Bay from the Pasific Osean.
10.(4) It crosses to San Fransisco to Oakland.
11.(12) After seeing the many hills and bridges, Miyoko was surprised to learn that San Fransisco has a very large Japanes population.
12.(2) She went to Japan center, where the Buidings and Restaurants looked familiar.
13.(6) Here she was able to talk with people in her native language.
14.(11) From them, she learned that San Fransisco is a most hospitable city for people from the Orient.


Exercise 1

1.KIND OF DEVELOPMENT: DEVELOPMENT FROM SUPPORTING FACTS TO A GENERAL STATEMENT.
b. At the bottom’ Professor John Mathewson had Sprained his ankel.
e. Partway up, he had lost his rope.
a. When he was almost at the top, his foot had slipped on a loose rock, and he had nearly fallen 1,000 feet down the steer side of the peak.
c. Finally, Professor John Mathewson crawled to the top of Mt. Everest.
d. It had been a long, hard climb to the top.

2. KIND OF DEVELOPMENT: DEVELOPMENT FROM THE MOST IMPORTANT TO THE LEAST IMPORTANT.
b. I argeud that two years of study abroad would help me a lot at this stage of my career.
e. I found it hard to leave my home and travel to another land.
c. For one thing, my father was not well.
a. Then, too, my mother wanted me to stay close my sister.
d. Finally, my sister offered to stay at home alone during my absence.
f. this made some of my problems begins to vanish.

3.KIND OF DEVELOPMENT: DEVELOPMENT FROM
b. Standing of the edge of the road, I looked up the fently winding driveway that climbed to the front of the road.
e. The house stood on a level space surrounded by tall oak trees.
a. Behind the house a hill rose sharply.
d. The hill ended in a curved peak that seemed to frame the whole scene.
c. I had never seen such a lovely setting for a house.

4.KIND OF DEVELOPMENT: DEVELOPMENT FROM THE MOST IMPORTANT TO LEAST IMPORTANT.
c. Jose did not complete his mathematics examination yesterday.
d. Like many college students, he does not know how to use time profitably during an examination.
a. He spent the first fifteen minutes of the hours working on the first of ten examination problems.
b. He spent other minutes doodling on his test paper.

5.KIND OF DEVELOPMENT: DEVELOPMENT FROM THE MOST IMPORTANT TO LEAST IMPORTANT.
a. Then you will come to a hallway leading to the library’s music room.
d. As you enter te main door of the library, you will see the information desk directly in front of you.
b. Walking arround the information desk to the left, you will pass the children’s reading room on your right.
e. At the end of the hallway you will see a sign.
c. The sign reads, To the Music Room.

EXERCISE 2

1.KIND OF DEVELOPMENT: DEVELOPMENT BY TIME
(2) Elizabet’s classmates knew that she would win the top award in chemistry during her senior year at Colombia University.
(3) First, she had studied chemistry during her sophomore and junior years.
(1) Second, she never missed a class.
(4) Third, she performed every required experiment in all her chemistry courses.
(5) Fourth, she always worked hard.

2.KIND OF DEVELOPMENT: DEVELOPMENT BY SPACE
(1) While standing in front of the information desk in the library, I saw some students using the files in the reference from some distance away.
(2) About 15 feet away from me, an old lady wearing a large hat put on her glasses. (3) She was studying a rare book in one of the locked display cases.
(4) Much closer to me, two students were quietly and seriously talking about a book.

3.KIND OF DEVELOPMENT: DEVELOPMENT FROM SUPPORTING FACTS TO A GENERAL STATEMENT
(1) Our candidates do not want our blassings.
(2) When she went to the polls, she took her ballot and simply wrote on the bottom of it, “God bless you all!”.
(3) We should not be like the lady who knew all the candidates in a small-town election and though they were all such nice people that she could not choose among them.
(4) They want our votes.
(5) We must all use our right to vote.

4.KIND OF DEVELOPMENT: DEVELOPMENT FROM THE MOST IMPORTANT TO LEAST IMPORTANT
(2) Arizona is a large state.
(3) Yet Arizona could absorb all six New England states, add Holland, and still have more than enough room to tuck in Switzerland.
(6) On a map, ordered by other western states, Arizona appears to be only of average size.
(1) But the state’s population, although it is growing at a tremendous rate, is well bellow that of the city of Pittsburg.
(5) Its population is only 638,000.
(4) Arizonans have plenty of living room.

5.KIND OF DEVELOPMENT: DEVELOPMENT FROM A GENERAL STATEMENT TO SUPPORTING STATEMENTS
(3) A good vocabulary, then, can give you a real sense of power and a feeling of pleasure.
(7) Look up the word genial in a dictionary before you leave school this afternoon.
(2) Use it correctly in convertation thee times before tomorrow’s class.
(6) If you learn a new word everyday, in a year’s time you will have 365 new sources of power and pleasure.
(4) The word will then be yours to keep.
(5) You’ll be on your way toward making yourself a master of words.
(1) Why not start now?